Hi Helen, the rock sequence works really well. However the paint sequence lacks vitality. It would be better with more cutaways of the guy throwing the paint. Also more big close ups of the hands as well as the words. It felt very 2 dimensional. I expect you used everything you shot? If so, maybe you could intercut with something else to make the sequence more exciting/interesting?
Hi Helen, the rock sequence works really well. However the paint sequence lacks vitality. It would be better with more cutaways of the guy throwing the paint. Also more big close ups of the hands as well as the words. It felt very 2 dimensional. I expect you used everything you shot? If so, maybe you could intercut with something else to make the sequence more exciting/interesting?
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